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happy ending.. fiction!

Love choose it’s story but mine were badly written….

Lemme try to elaborate my theory

Not that I’m weak or something but in a relationship I tend to stay submissive. Call me old fashion –aye!– because for me guys should step up and lead. They are the writers of my stories –off course I’m the editor but hey… I can’t do anything if the writers suck–

In most novel I read, it usually consist of 3 parts; introduction,content and closure. I add one more factor which is the climax, because I think its one of the key factor that will determine how are we going to continue the story.

At the introduction part (which usually the most beautiful part) we get to know the characters, tons of new people added to support the leading role. The mum, the dad, the brother/sister,the gang, the best bud, the exes, etc etc…some of them came as cameos and the others as supporting role. Some might say cruel judging the book by its introduction part but seriously sometimes this part can be sucks specially when it come to EX-es (messy!) …. famous poet wrote “LOVE IS BLIND” I think introduction part IS THE BLIND SPOT.

As the story goes.. ladies and gentlemen entering content! Content is when reality struck. Here are some random words usually use inside a content; happy sad, anger, LOVE, SEX, choice, decision, rejection, cuddling, 3rd party, long distance, other woman, other man, affair, unfaithful, temptation, passion, patient, courage, fight, ego, selfish, ME time, time, lack of time, touch, lack of touch, parent (in a more vivid appearance) ex girlfriend/boyfriend, quarrel, fight, jealousy, ignorance, depend, compassion, empathy, faith, honesty etc etc it’ll take me centuries to finish it, at that time you’ll probably find me dead (cause of death: chronic hemorrhoids) but I guess you get my point.

Good writer tell a story in an interesting way, by adding elements of suspense so that the reader would want to know how the story turn out. The writer may choose to make the story humorous by adding elements of comedy or jokes.while others (the kind of creature that walks into my life) write a totally unreadable plot and unfocused story line! Dull! Weird as ifs only meant for idiots!

part #3 is climax. This is when the “fed-up” meter goes to maximum! at this stage you have to choose…… some find marriage and other find separation as the answer. Actually there are some X factors that would help us creating an brilliant climax (remember this is only baits to sparks up the story) –note: shortcut, find a fucking awesome writer/lover, much more efficient and saving tons of energy and time–
1. find a writer/leading role/character that has personal principles (i fond everything related to principles, i think its sexy)
2. make the character choose between keep or break his principles. His decision can become the focal point of all the conflict in the story, triggering release of emotional tension. What he decides at this moment shows who he really, truly is. It is a test of character. The decisions and actions of the character at this moment of high stress shows what his true feelings are.
3. Giving some hardcore consequences of decision. Follow Cause and Effect principles —and if it fits with the story, make things as bad as possible for the character. (I know not all love story sucks but again sometime you need something HOT to boost things up)
4. Resolution. This is where the character/ writer decide what his going to do next. How he react and solves all. How he get what he deserve .. good ending or bad one.

Closure! this is my favorite part! This is when you take part to the story, at this point you decide the ending. honestly, i don’t believe in happy ending i mean seriously dude how can you’d be happy if its end? I think its overrated! end is end that’s it. Happy Ending is another fiction created by professional writer that were actually meant for children and not for grown up!

NOW let me explain why I said my story were written badly. Mostly in my story the writer don’t have vision on what kind of story he want to create. Boring and lame. Too many drama!! ok maybe initially, meant turning a girl to Cinderella, but in my case turn normal to utter moron!  not mention the deja vu!  read my lips…I had enough repetition! sometime I wonder why? are they that ignorance? These writer are just helpless… i give a hint, they ignore it, i give a warning the thought as a break up ultimatum … my goodness sometime its easier to communicate with dog (some) at least they pay attention.. 😦 don’t they know that small things count? but for these writers, those small things were meant to be small and forgotten…. *sigh*

I haven’t met my writer yet but I hope one day I meet him! when that time come we’ll make a story that would make Jane Austin proud!


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